Post by gluey on Jul 1, 2007 12:43:13 GMT -5
I don't know if Ro told you, so I figured I'd put it up here in case you didn't know. Okay so basically, at this point, Lerris retrieves Grayson. Maybe by force, maybe he asked for him (probably by force, Grohn wouldn't be very willing to give him up if you want my input), I don't know. So he probably cuts the harness from around Grohn's neck or something, takes Grayson, and is at last reunited while Grohn collapses to the ground. Maybe Lerris is just so overjoyed at this point that he retrieved Grohn that he temporarily forgets his mission to take out Grohn. So Grohn is still concious, and he realizes what has happened, is filled with rage and tackles Lerris. Lerris, still holding Grayson, falls down the edge of the cliff to a small shelf that barely juts out maybe 2 feet from the side of the cliff. Somehow in the fall, Grayson dies. I'll leave it up to you as to how that happens...maybe Grayson hits his head, or maybe Lerris loses his grip on him and he goes over the edge...either way, the child dies, and Lerris somehow gets knocked out. This might be done by Grohn, jumping down to him, or maybe he hit his head in the fall (which could account for him losing his grip on Grayson and not losing his mind immediately). You can decide how he gets knocked out. Anyways, from that point, Grohn jumps down, and is tempted to toss Lerris over the cliff, but decides against it for once, and drags him back up, saving him.
Sound good? Any changes or problems you have with this? (This is the basic idea Ro and I came up with.)
Sound good? Any changes or problems you have with this? (This is the basic idea Ro and I came up with.)