Post by Rowenna on Apr 12, 2009 0:01:03 GMT -5
Happy Easter!
As you can see, I posted the rewrite of the old thread, "Looking For Trouble"--I'm not totally decided on the new title, except that the old one kinda stinks. I like Enter, I thought about Inheritance, but I'm trying to avoid the connection to Eragon.
More importantly, I wanted to note my use of the violin throughout the story. We have four dominant characters to our story, and a fiddle has four strings; I was using each note, on its own, to represent a life story, and the fact that more come foreshadow the interwoven complex of four different life histories put into one story. It's what's interesting about our story, I think, that we have four complete histories and follow all of their motives, where most books focus on one person. If we decide on the final thread being called, well, The Final Thread, we develop a full circle. Thoughts?
Also, I did something a little different with Rowen's name. At first, it was laziness, that I couldn't figure out a place to put an introduction, but then it took an interesting turn. Some feedback on that?
Oh, and yes, I know Enter is very unedited; I just had to get some semblance being done or it would sit on my desktop for all eternity.
As you can see, I posted the rewrite of the old thread, "Looking For Trouble"--I'm not totally decided on the new title, except that the old one kinda stinks. I like Enter, I thought about Inheritance, but I'm trying to avoid the connection to Eragon.
More importantly, I wanted to note my use of the violin throughout the story. We have four dominant characters to our story, and a fiddle has four strings; I was using each note, on its own, to represent a life story, and the fact that more come foreshadow the interwoven complex of four different life histories put into one story. It's what's interesting about our story, I think, that we have four complete histories and follow all of their motives, where most books focus on one person. If we decide on the final thread being called, well, The Final Thread, we develop a full circle. Thoughts?
Also, I did something a little different with Rowen's name. At first, it was laziness, that I couldn't figure out a place to put an introduction, but then it took an interesting turn. Some feedback on that?
Oh, and yes, I know Enter is very unedited; I just had to get some semblance being done or it would sit on my desktop for all eternity.